Rainy Day Canvas

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rachlou
rachlou
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Rivulets of rain
God’s tears slide down my window
Essence of his pain

Oily puddles lie
In filthy pavement hollows
Yawning reflections

Spring bulbs closed tightly
Asleep, unwilling to smile
Under frowning sky

Insipid grey light
Weakly steals through angry clouds
Casting long shadows

Painting ochre strokes
Refracting the silver drops
Beautiful rainbows

A splash of cobalt
Cerulean sky peeks through
Sunlight shines anew

Payne’s grey washed away
A Jackson Pollock
Riot of colour

rachlou
rachlou
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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
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dull to bright in vivid colors.. what a change part of a day makes... Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Suitably vivid

with a poignancy that runs underneath it

I liked this image the most

'Painting ochre strokes

Refracting the silver drops'

mentioned in today's new poem reviews

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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To be so lucky as to have a gray rainy late Winter day. Excellent imagery of the dull scene transforming into the colorful sight of Spring.

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