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Raw

byDu Lac©

Raw

So raw and painful,
My needs not met,
Still holding, stopping,
Yet gushing wet.

Aching full tension,
The edge of bliss,
I hold myself back,
Lusts breathing kiss.

Pleading and giving,
Soon all is lost,
Desires so fresh.
Fullfillments cost.

Swirling emotions,
Denials touch,
Cumming, screaming,
My souls debauch.

dlt © Nov 22 2004

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