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Reclining Nude Remix

bygreenmountaineer©

In Soho's summer afternoon steam
with a cloudburst that can barely relieve
we set the table for Cornish cream tea.

Tonight, my Dear, Dom Perignon,
what's left of the scone and clotted cream,
before I slip off my organza gown
to recline on red satin sheets

whilst you, my Modigliani
whose stroke jounces me ever so slowly,
paint your canvas inside of me.

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by EllenMore09/14/18

This is a very complex poem, Though it doesn't seem to be.

But look at the structure: the rhyme pattern (aaa baba aaa, some slant), the rhythmic structure (four and three stress lines, accentual rather than accentual syllabic), the use of alliteration (look atmore...

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by Anonymous09/13/18

no green tea?

paint on dear poet

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by JonasRobinson09/11/18

Beautiful.

Very enchanting and with a ravishing feel to it. I felt springs of purity fall through my nerves.

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by tazz31709/10/18

UNPROTECTED AS IT SEEMS

good friends do not require umbrellas. TK U MLJ LV NV

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