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a moon from legend
pulls dark waves
onto a deserted beach
i cinch around you
and dancers' shadows
cast by firelight play
on walls of a cave
we grind to climax
and supple panthers
in silky blackness
hunt remorselessly
we cool from passion
and a cypress swamp
in gloaming mystery
fades toward night
http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=32516444&postcount=2883
your poem has been reviewed today over at the poetry forum of Lit. It was a fascinating piece. I enjoyed reading it and recommend it to others.
The more I read the more delighted I am at how much you make me enjoy something I don't normally like--erotic poetry. It normally seems trite or flat to me but your erotic verse is always full of surprises.