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Idling engine, alchemic purr stable
Pillow-propped, I watch you kill the Cable

Choirs of fluttering steel valves breathing
Your giddy cougar smirk, green eyes seething

In molecular rainbow oil cylinders slide
Breath hitches, greeting your satin glide

Gear-clunk, every chunky bolt abuzz
Easy is as easy does

Fog blanket of rose exhaust roils
Fingers curl, bronze skin boils

Quivery lewd-orange needles oscillate
Urgently oral diplomats reciprocate

Revved, floored – incredulous magmatic surge
Friction-forgotten plunge down to the verge

Risky whine of precision frequency
Entwined pulses reach zero latency

Synched plunge of stocky piston heads
Every nerve sits up and BEGS

Reckless noise topples aural ferocity
Houston, we’ve achieved escape velocity.

ExplosiveHalt hydraulic sp ut te r
Melting moans; our collapse is utter

Death of heat plus glowing motion
Cuddled down in our cotton ocean.

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keacremekeacremeabout 17 years ago
in five, four...

NASA porn. cool idea-- might save someone a drive to florida in a diaper.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Sounds...

like a very colorful super duper revved up monster ready for Nascar. Maybe you overdid the metaphors a bit but a fine job non the less.