- Erotic Poetry
- Reflecting Maya
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Click hereThe last thing I did was invent a new song.
Smooth as nicotine at 4 a.m.,
it was tender madness
when I entered her.
I was so hard I was like thunder and
her nakedness adorned her in the lamplight.
She said she wanted to know how it felt.
The first thing I did was unbutton her blouse.
The first thing I did was unbutton her blouse.
She said she wanted to know how it felt.
Her nakedness adorned her in the lamplight.
I was so hard I was like thunder and
when I entered her
it was tender madness,
smooth as nicotine at 4 a.m.
The last thing I did was invent a new song.
- COMMENTS
unpredictablebijouover 15 years agoThat's a friggin' brilliant piece. I've played with similar forms, but so far it always seems really forced. I'm truly and seriously impressed. Extraordinary work.
LeBrozover 15 years agoThis poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>
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Safe_Betover 15 years agoThat is just TOO cool of a poem. I have never seen a poem in this form before. Bows.
WickedEveover 15 years agoFantastic! It kind of reminds me of Pulp Fiction -- how the end of the movie wraps back around to where it began. Cool way to organize the lines and even without this particular form (does it have a name?) it would still be a good poem!
