Reflection

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Just something I was feeling deep inside.
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I stand alone on a white sandy beach.
The night sky looking down on me,
as The stars sparkle above like a diamond in the rough.
The moonlight shines down reflecting off of the calm night sea.

I lower my head to looking into the calm sea.
Looking like a mirror to see a young old woman
staring back, crying from the inside.

I realize the young old woman is me.
Dropping to my knees, quickly covering my face.
Telling myself that my eyes were just watering up.
I knew better, I didn't want to admit nor show weakness.

I wipe my tears away from my left hand.
Picking myself back up, since no one could hear my cries
To give a soft, light, hug, and tell me everything will be fine.
The night wind grows cold. A slight shiver running through my body.
Wrapping my arms around myself for warmth and comfort.

I turn away, look up at the night sky one last time,
at the beautiful night sky. Walking away I hear the sound of the tide coming in,
I take a peek over my right shoulder. Noticing my footprints being washed away.
Coming to the conclusion the sea doesn't care about my heart.

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RobinRulesRoarsRobinRulesRoarsalmost 7 years ago
Very high tide with a smooth edge

Hi I really think you put your words together in a flow fuel hot style. I felt in was inside the waves.