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Click hereletting go
freeing, releasing, granting
the pain, the sorrow, the life to take form.
breathing is the hardest thing to do;
if I keep things locked inside
will it make everything all better?
the burning, stinging, pulsing
courses through my tired lungs,
filling every hole that is
broken, lost, empty;
bridging the gaps,
creating something anew;
with a slow deflation,
transforming.
I am alive.
No, this one wasn't a personal experience. It just came to me while I was writing something else, actually. Thank you all for your feedback. :)
...poems dwelling on depressing things but this one has a positive twist at the end and made me glad I read it through.
This was a Shattering experience.~~~!! The flow was great..The saddness at first was felt, almost a desperation..*Smiles*~Then you snuck up and grabbed us with the last few lines. I love that in a poem...More Please~~!!