- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Relentless Tide
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Click hereSlowly,
she creeps in
like ebony nights.
Waves pounding,
she swallows,
gorging herself,
like monsters
in childhood dreams,
teeth nashing.
She feeds,
snatching life.
To swim
from her terror,
pointless.
Slowly,
she retreats,
like the dawn
peeking through.
She slumbers,
leaving remants,
collected,
treasured,
worshipped.
Reminders,
of her power,
her conquering force,
mans mortal exsistance.
- COMMENTS
sandspikeover 19 years agoMan I'm glad I looked at the board this morning. The
best surf description I've seen. Do it right, do it quick.
Like every 7th wave, you carry a force stronger than
the rest.
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoreally well done! I'm late reading most of the poems and I'm amazed and envious of this good stuff. But not envious enough to not want more. :)
Anonymousalmost 20 years agovoice in the vastness of aquatic poems. A unique beauty, fawnie, truly.
tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago...Fawnie. Everything you write gets stronger! No extras, nothing that's not needed. Write like this for a while, and when you expand again, the words will be pure.
Syndra Lynnalmost 20 years agorule! This is a wonderful collection of words in just the right lines.
