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Click hereOur dreams were dreams that never had an end.
We flew on wings that you thought were pretend.
Our hurts and pains were things a kiss could mend.
How great 'twould be to be a child again.
I enjoyed the poem's meaning and it's flow, the last line may flow better if it were spelled out...
'How great it would be to be a child again.'
perhaps, but mainly, I liked your write! (~_~)