- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Remember me not
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Remember me not,
Tenchi Akira
I’ve forgotten your name.
I can’t remember myself.
But I haven’t forgotten the pain.
I haven’t forgotten you.
Oceans remember your warmth better than I do.
The sky knows your eyes better than I do.
And the wind remembers your scent better than I do.
All because I’ve forgotten your name.
My sleeping is restless as I stir, always at midnight.
I thought I could fight to keep your love for me.
But now I see its peace we both need.
The Reapers grin is what I now yearn.
I’ve forgotten your name.
I can’t remember myself.
But I haven’t forgotten the pain.
I haven’t forgotten you.
- COMMENTS
Syndra Lynnalmost 20 years agothan your earlier offerings. I like it even though it could still use some trimming. Edit, edit, edit! And keep writing.
YDDalmost 20 years agoThe second stanza is very strong,
a poem unto itself.
edit:
"its" is a contraction
and "Reapers" is possessive
