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Click hereDarkness oppressive smothers your sight
A kiss on your lips, all the knots are in place
I take you freely bathed in the light
Your struggles are over, you give up the fight
Whispers in shadows bring tears to your face
Darkness oppressive smothers your sight
Reassurances offered “It’s your turn tonight”
Against bonds you wrestle but fear not a trace
I take you freely bathed in the light
Sounds of cocks stroking, the rush a delight
Smell pussies dripping, a feminine embrace
Darkness oppressive smothers your sight
Wet splashing and gushing moans echo the night
Expressions contorted, to climax they race
I take you freely bathed in the light
Guests leave us alone, just one candle burns bright
Untie each knot, silken bonds don't replace
Darkness oppressive smothers your sight
I take you freely bathed in the light
You do have a way with imagery. This feels fluid to me, in an effortless way. I'm no expert on villanelles, but it flows along nicely, without giving the impression that any of the lines are there to meet the requirement of the form. Did I also mention, it's just plain hot? ;)