- Erotic Poetry
- Restraint
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His restraint is
So subtle
Yet
So subversive
That it barely
Serves to
Keep me
Bed borne
Supine
Anchored
Grounded
Rooted
But that's my soul just there
Greeting the chandelier
Shamelessly flirting amongst
Dangerous crystals
Illuminated and bedazzled
- COMMENTS
impressiveabout 19 years agoThose two words "made" this for me. So casual, yet so revealing. ~Imp
BlackShanglanabout 19 years agoI enjoyed the balance of this poem, the short lines slowing the reading through the first half and then the sudden leap with the soul into the chandelier. Good images there, and a good control of diction that nicely expresses both the actions and the emotions. Thanks for a pleasant read.
jthserraover 19 years agothe subtlety within the poem is enhanced by your subtle wording. Wonderful poem...
jim : }
Reltneover 19 years agoAn excellent example of a well written erotic poem. You don't have to be graphic to be sexy. This poem is a good step above the normal Lit. erotic offering.
Nicely done - Thank you.
Tathagataover 19 years ago~But that's my soul just there
Greeting the chandelier
Shamelessly flirting amongst
Dangerous crystals
Illuminated and bedazzled~
great images and perfect word choices.
very Nice
thank you
