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jinsays
jinsays
2 Followers

I'm balancing preamble
on blue jean fringe

expendable.


I desire bareness
a necessity to absorb
the atmosphere's kiss
to awaken senses
long put to rest;

in illustrious candor.

Stripped
yet
fluently arabesque,
veils of modesty fall away,
allowing for an
elements-performed rhapsody,
a 'Carmina Burana'
in crescendo;

animated.

Unaccentuated.

Naked in calming presence
of the morning sun,
I cherish astral father's
adoration.

Lavishing heart's warm rays
dangled in rushes,
upon tingling flesh;

He loves me.

I celebrate my
femininity,

despite human flaws.

Unadorned,
I am revealed,


and alive.

jinsays
jinsays
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bluerainsbluerainsover 15 years ago
interesting

work...word use a plus..a well oiled piece...blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice!

This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!