- Erotic Poetry
- Right Hand
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Click hereI feel desire running through my veins
the ravenous suckling of your mouth.
The pull of hungry desire it creates.
Your left hand clasps mine.
the gold ring caught between my gripping fingers.
Your right hand, oh so right indeed.
Lifting me higher.
The right hand.
Your mouth moves to merge with mine.
The electric shock of your tongue against mine.
Pressing myself against your right hand.
The right hand, giving me the ability to feel desire.
- COMMENTS
wildsweetoneabout 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the New Poems Review in the Poetry Forum. Please feel free to come along - wildsweetone
Amyfriendabout 17 years ago"Desire running through your veins, the ravenous suckling of your mouth. The pull of hungry desire it creates. Your left hand clasps mine, the gold ring caught between my gripping fingers. The electric shock of your tongue against mine."..Gulp..I guess you're not playing scrabble.. but it does sound like fun.
LeBrozabout 17 years agoInteresting style, more suggestive of an adulterous affair, with subtle mention of the ring.
