- Erotic Poetry
- Ring Around A Bathtub
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Click hereI use to give her bubble baths
I'd surround the tub with candles
A bouquet of red roses waiting
to greet her in our bedroom
I remember her paradise
as I drank between moist
midnight thighs
But one day she found
someone new and my love
went rushing down the drain
Wasted
Leaving me dirty and empty
Like a ring around a bathtub
- COMMENTS
f-cynyrover 18 years agobut i just loved the line"between midnight thighs." very very evocative.
LeBrozover 18 years agoOnly substantive suggestion would be in that third line - omit the color of the roses - it seems to flow better without that one extra word.
