- Erotic Poetry
- Ripe, then Rotting
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Her friend should know. She gets unwound
By playing lonely men she's found.
"Here, have some more of this sweet wine.
Your husband's body's looking fine!"
The drinks excuse their opened hearts.
She wants to flash her private parts.
To keep her down, "He's not that good.
He doesn't do the things he should."
She has not felt him deep within
For weeks, no, months. "How long's it been?"
"It's been three years." "It's been that long?
It's your own fault if something's wrong!"
With his firm touch, a giggle goes,
And where they are, nobody knows.
They squeeze ripe fruit before it rots,
And both agreed they liked it lots.
- COMMENTS
WhiteWave48over 16 years agoThere is such a lot behind the little story in this poem - something sinister and deeply sad. The decadence suggested by their bodies likened to ripe but decaying fruit is very powerful. For me, the rhyme hammers the message home by making it very tight. It does not detract in any way.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agosomeone is being derelict of their duties and they may have passed onto another..
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoIntriguing image at the end of the poem. I wish you developed it more throughout the poem. Otherwise the poem was more like rhymed straight narrative.
Unbridled_Passionabout 17 years agoeven if it is with your friend's husband-very cute poem!
normal jeanabout 17 years agothis is really cute! and sort of sinister. I enjoyed your sense of humor in this one.
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