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Click hereThe ripple you started,
because you believed in Him.
The ripple you created,
because you followed Him.
The ripple He cleansed me with,
because you prayed to Him.
The ripple I started,
because I called to Him.
The ripple that was created,
because I believed in Him.
The ripple He cleansed my familt with,
because of my faith in Him.
The ripple of blessing you started,
is now a wave of grace.
Excellent Poem, you're at your best right now and your passion and talent shines through in your work. Hope, faith and salvation are all present in this piece and I have to say I absolutely loved it, well done! ~ J
of faith is what i pulled out of this piece and it's focus is written for the purpose of salvation. that is how i measure it up. well written......nice job
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thanks for the journey