Riptides...

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Riptides...

The sea
looks calm...
the air is clean, fresh
and the day is warm.

But underneath
is a current unseen.
A current that is dangerous.

If there was a time
and place
where we could go to
and find what we missed before,
would you go back with me?

I know the steps
that were wrongly taken
and they could be avoided this time.
I know how to float now,
so I wouldn't have to
hold on to you for my life.

The riptides are there still.
Can we get past them... please?

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