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Click hereBy lips and teeth, by serpent-wired coils,
A frame of roses drowns the hanging spike.
Jungles open under that trumpet tongue,
Winged object, world serpent, riding the wave.
By lips and teeth, by serpent-wired coils,
the skin I secretly invoke
is tender flesh upon the rocky shaft,
the surface of your wild self.
That arrow guides you into springing earth,
to hips that drive and rock and press
in raw and rhythmic greeting.
A frame of roses drowns the hanging spike
and you can see your own deep slide
all slick with salty foam, and striking deep,
this lively root drives thick and through
to press the petals open for the shaft
of bright invasion, drumming up
a voice quick-winged with lilies.
Jungles open under that trumpet tongue.
You pierce the shadows with your hardest heat
and grind me down to liquid so I spill
like storms into your rigid arms.
Like bud and leaf and flower in the mist
of birdsong, on a dappled path
we meet and strike in shifting light.
Winged object, world serpent, riding the wave
of godhead, as you focus down
on moan and mantra of the simplest act,
the flesh and where and how it enters,
the chain of fire blossoms in your spine,
a river heated up to gold,
and opens at the mouth so you can roar
your root, your single holy name
into the center of my earth.
Did a fine job in crafting this glosa. Made it into a most compelling and stylized erotic piece. Well done.
Starts out looking too much like poetry, by the fourth stanza it becomes
I feel lucky that I was sittng at home and not next to you becuae I could feel how you were weaving a magic spell over me, and then who knows? you could have had you evil way with me! Darn good!
BEAUTIFUL!!!
I love it, love it. But then again, it has a garden/nature theme and your form is a nice touch.
A frame of roses drowns the hanging spike
and you can see your own deep slide
all slick with salty foam, and striking deep,
this lively root drives thick and through
to press the petals open for the shaft
of bright invasion, drumming up
a voice quick-winged with lilies.
lovely passage, Paris. thoroughly enjoyed this read
xoxox
NJ
I liked the rich images of this poem. I was kind of struggling with the rhythm of this because at first it was regular enough to seem metrical, but then you shortened the lines, stress-wise. It might lend itself to a sonnet, though. I feel like a goof rating this. What does that thing really mean anyway? Couldn't I give you a 90 degrees in the shade? This poem was definitely hot. Thanks.