river

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you
are a river

i plunge my hands
into your breasts

i submerge my head
in the deep pool
swirling
between your hips

each leg
a branch

each toe
a tributary

i try
to swim your length

i sink
in your unfathomable depth

the liquid stars
the wavering moon

you

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4 Comments
LiarLiarover 19 years ago
mentioned in the New Poems review thread

"..A minimal, elegant set.."

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
A love poem....

...and truly erotic. Nicely done.

I'm not using the thermometer.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
Very appealing...

...in its simple purity and scrumptious images. Plunge in, poetboy.....the water waits.

AngelineAngelineover 19 years ago
like neruuuuuuuuuuuda

liquid stars and wavering moon--it's a sensibility, si? :)

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