river ghosts~~~

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~~~~ river ghosts ~~~~

They glide
over the river
in a slow
flowing grace

Swirls
of white
in one
steady pace

Hovered
above the surface
along the river
they coast

Until
the sun rises
vapors lure
river ghosts

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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a really rich image that left me wanting more.

as inspiring as your river - excellent!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I like this MeT

Lovely images. A five.

Tess

sacksackover 18 years ago
different take ...

on mist and fog...."river ghosts" is a novel concept!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Beautifully done with a near mystical aura. ty