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Click hereAs he washed under the cold flowing waterfall,
He heard the call of the beautiful red cardinal,
When he looked into the pale blue sky,
a beautiful sight brought tears to his eyes,
A snow capped mountaintop kissing the clouds.
The mountain’s streams and fantasies,
Seemed to go on forever,
Every time he turned around,
A new scene could be viewed or strange new sounds were heard,
Creating a new sensitivity within his soul,
That gave him peace of mind, making him feel complete once again,
At least, it seemed that way ,
In his snow capped Mountain river of dreams.
Like the branches of streams slowly coming together with the rivers,
and nature coming together with the seasons,
He how understands the meaning of forever,
And knowing his life will never be the same again,
Cause the raging rivers and waterfalls have cleansed him,
Setting his soul free, to soar once again,
High into the beautiful blue skies.
Of his Snow Capped Mountain river of dreams,
Your Poem has been mentioned on the New Poem reviews thread for Tuesday 8th of February.
Your Poem has been mentioned on the New Poem reviews thread for Tuesday 8th of February.
PARAMOUNT POEM ! <grinin'>
The picture this poem painted in my mind was majestic, and I love a river (all kinds <grin>) very touching chez~
They say a mountain is best gazed upon from a distance, to see it in all its grandness! From Snow Caps to forested base and touching heaven and clouds melting into the horizon and ultimately into ones self feeling connected to it. Then some like to see it close up and explore it's every essence! That's what come to mind with your wonderful river of dreams M.E.T.
PARAMOUNT POEM!!!!
Who is this M.E.T. of which you speak? *wink* Lovely and peaceful, a perfect tribute.
Although the rhythm felt off in this poem, the serenity and joy overtook this.. and I felt the rebirth process of a new soul...ty for the nice morning read..
du~