Road to Forever

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
NO MATTER THE DISTANCE

the view remains unchanged. TK U MLJ LV NV

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Great picture with strong words to go with

In my mind the split which apparently was intended to maneuver the relevant words into strategic concrete distance from the rest of the sentence was redundant and in fact unnecessarily distracting. The picture with its very long focus does the work of demonstrating the distance from the lover much better than the small space between the words. Just my opinion. Still, a very impressive short work.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Fine looking mystery draws the reader in, in search of a far off place.

ghost_girlghost_girlover 16 years ago
my favorite painting

by Monet, is of a singular man walking down a country road. I can look at it for hours, wondering the circumstances of the trek.

You have captured perfectly, the wonder, the why and the where your poetics along with the path ahead are simple and lovely.

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