- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Roller Coaster
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Click hereHold on tight
This is gonna be a roller coaster
Don't let go, I need you
I can do it on my own
Put your arm around me, protect me
Stop trying to drown me, you don't own me
Don't cry, baby girl
You're a slut
I love you
I lied
I'm looking for the truth
Where do I go?
I want this to end
Hold me
Touch me
Don't hurt me this time
I'm trying to trust you
- COMMENTS
goodsonformomover 11 years agoI like it very much BBWangeleyes. It makes me think of the conflicts in our relationships....how we are ignored or suffocated....pushed and pulled......the tensions of our commitments and how we are all conflicted at times.......It made me think....Thank you.
twelveooneover 11 years agoyou brought your own fan club
and then the beast shows up
two things, it is a little unfair to others
and here is the most important part, fans can be an impediment to writing development
in your poem, I don't know who is talking, it appears to be two people
I didn't vote
