- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Roman Holiday
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Click hereLingering over these overexposed portraits,
froze embedded in three days of Ember,
I oppose the fasting for four reasons,
and there come to blows over what I remember.
I toss in meandering a wishful coin,
her lip gloss embrocated my chapped lips,
at a loss to finding where she eloign, lost
sign of the cross she signs over strips,
tore from the gown she hoped would one day
pass over her hips.
- COMMENTS
GuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago.......clever sleight of words - "four reasons" for the usual "seasons" I think "she signs over strips" should be "sighs over" - perhaps a typo? In any case it got a five from me, easily.
Tess
Anonymousabout 13 years agooverexposed/Froze/I oppose/come to blows, or 4/1/2/3 syllables.
I was playing a numbers game, so 'frozen' would give me an unwanted extra utterance. I tried it again in the second stanza with 1/2/3/4, Toss/lip gloss/at a loss/sign of the cross, but over the years I added syllables to make it more easily digested. Word games usually don't work out, but given time I've found some new tricks. Thanks for commenting and reading. -wby
twelveooneabout 13 years agoin this line:
"fasting for four reasons,"
"eloign" doesn't come up as well, but not bad, in a way clever, but seems so. A 5/
