- Erotic Poetry
- Roseus
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Click hereShe slapped me
and I dripped sap
along my leg,
like a young pine
twisted, cut
by a severe forester.
But then I lapped
from that thin slice
in her trunk,
my hair grasped tight,
held firm.
There I drank another life,
from mother to mother,
set myself low
and opened. Pink.
- COMMENTS
unpredictablebijouover 15 years agoand immensely delicate. It's funny; you really seem to have a knack for understanding women and their interactions. This is sweet and angry in all the right ways.
WickedEveover 15 years agoNice line: like a young pine twisted, cut. Last stanza wasn't my favorite but, overall, good poem.
