- Erotic Poetry
- Rusty Lee
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The evenings entertainment is a pub
Costing money you dont have
Giving you cancer you dont want
For where is the lonely persons muse?
Do nothing in this den of sin to entertain
Must I splay in bed?
Listen to radiohead?
Dare I suckle the electric teat of television?
Locking my body in this fortress of semen
In the attic of a thousand faceless harletts
Comforted only by the soft clasp of a warm tissue
Rubbed vigorously against this flacid wand of protien
That shall never by touched by womens fair hand
Unsheaf, release, erupt and ease
23 years of lonelyness, waiting, crying.
Where is Rusty Lee when i needed the laughter?
Where is Rusty Lee?
- COMMENTS
normal jeanalmost 15 years agospell check! "harletts... protien.... etc. One of the most important things a writer can do is spell check. IF you don't have that, which is mind-boggling, get someone to read it for you and edit. You do yourself a disservice when you submit your work like this, you lose credibility, you will not be taken seriously and your readers will back click not finishing the read.
I wish you the best with your writing, visit the forum, there are threads with help on most subjects and some people have time and are will to read over your work if you desire. I have some limited time on the weekends if you ever want me to look over your work, PM me.
keep writing :)
NJ
