Safe In A Barnstorm

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Baba8
Baba8
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Safe In A Barnstorm


Safe, I didn't need
to hold father's hand

Safe in a firestorm,
Sacrifice--accepted.

Safe, we
fed and drank.
The barnstorm tamed,
earth and air our ally

Baba8

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BedwenchBedwenchover 15 years ago
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I have a barn you can storm anytime! Love all your writings. Baba8 is the best author on this site.

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
Just wonderful

I found this one spare, lovely and very affectionate. Perfectly executed work. Thanks for the read.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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Wonderful little poem! I did check out the definition of barnstorm. Not sure which one to use. Two of them work in this poem.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 15 years ago
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I know what a barnstorm is, it's this poem. Very nicely done.

lorencinolorencinoover 15 years ago
I like

Politicians go about barnstorming in big rowdy tents and perhaps, to a child, adults going wild and screaming is some sort of firestorm, all tamed by a calming parent whose residue of strength comes from his work in the fresh air of the open fields. Maybe the firestorm destroying our economy right now?<br><br>

Just a possibility, I suppose, but the poem conveyed that sense of a child's newly discovered security in a frightening world quite clearly for me.

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