- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Sally TV
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Click hereWatching your
constantly changing
the station conversation
dance with your
“if you only knew” gestures
my mind reruns to the days
when I used to sit
and watch reruns
of I Love Lucy
even though
I knew them all by heart.
- COMMENTS
sweet GA peachesabout 16 years agofunny, how at one time, nothing seems
to matter, but love,then years down the road
the reflection is laughing back at you.
I adored this piece of witty humor love,
and I loved Lucy too... lol..
You have changed something about your writing,
not sure what it is, but want you to know-
though I have always remained partial to you,
this is clever, and made me smile.
sGp
RhymeFairyover 17 years agohilarious ~!! I knew you had it in you.
Just had to regroup and let it flow eh ~
I love your humor and word play here ~
Also, seems a bit romantic and sweet ~~ just sayin' ~
More Please~
twelveooneover 17 years agoDON'T EVER doubt me again, when I say you have talent.
This is a perfect understated witty observation and comment. I am refering to the poem. Try playing with the line breaks, see if you can make it better. "conversation dance" tripped me, I'm not sure if it is deliberate, it works though.
Best
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