- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Salto Mortale
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LEMONIA (F)LEAP EDELTRAUD => UNTITLED CHAPTER (AS YET)
AVRA PALM
THURSDAY EVENING
4/9/2014
SALTO MORTALE
(Somersault)
Distance, dissimilarity, disorder,
still called a life,
near to all,
distant from all,
dissimilar
and gloriously disordered.
Who can complain
but the acrobat?
Not even him
after surviving
his latest salto mortale.
You live to fight another day,
proud in dissimilarity,
provoking in disorder,
getting more inaccessible
by the minute.
- COMMENTS
todski28over 9 years agouse of repeating key phrases to hammer home a point with enough variation to hammer with precision as opposed to mindlessly wielding a mash hammer,
the way you loop the end to the beginning is clever
