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Click hereSculpture: Genesis, Book One
- Prompted in part by annaswirl’s Mannequin
(and an unnamed sculpture of my own)
I had intended to sculpt the universe
starting with a small planet of clay
spinning silently on an axis of wood
letting the earth mould in my hands
thumbs working ravines
drawing the world out of primordial mass
like the cosmos coaxing sin
until somewhere along that determined evolution
the world became lost beneath my hands
spinning out of control
threatening balance and sphere
changing form and essence
until it no longer resembled the world intended
but growing a tail and humanoid form
became a world dangling like a head on a spit
as in that movie with the music by Strauss
“Also Sprach Zarathustra”
the embryo flowed beneath my thumbs
gaining symmetry as mountains disappeared
and chasms bubbled magma
mass moving in tectonic rapture
as a mouth and eyes appeared
and the world slid away from my palms
easing down the back of her head
tracing spinal column and cortex lobes
clavicles spreading in galactic mist
like Eve opening her thighs
awaiting the placement of the rib
as somewhere rumbled raven obelisks
the world resembled not an earth
but a decidedly Tenctonese form
of a woman smiling mutely
in wonderment at the lust of this creator
as I took equal parts of darkness and light
moulding firmaments and heavenly bodies
spinning her on my axis of wood
this is wonderfully in control and out-of-control at the same time / so many great lines /
this:
drawing the world out of primordial mass
like the cosmos coaxing sin
and:
the embryo flowed beneath my thumbs
gaining symmetry as mountains disappeared
and chasms bubbled magma
mass moving in tectonic rapture
and:
clavicles spreading in galactic mist
like Eve opening her thighs
awaiting the placement of the rib
that last image is outrageously great.
Your poem roams over a lot of territory, but you have fine control and it works--as with most of what I read by you--really really well. lol.
And I vote for "tectonic raptures" as phrase of the day? week? month? I dunno. I really like it. :)
I could feel its slippery form in my grip as I read-- quite an achievement, JD4G. I was waiting for a pygmalion reference from you!
"Mould": a nod to your Canadian neighbors?
and a very interesting idea..
and ummmmmm
"spinning on my wood"
yeah
Thank you