Searching For You

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mtnman2003
mtnman2003
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Searching For You

Visited Yahoo Messenger today.
Again.
Sent an IM, searching for you.
Hiya Honey! it said.
Time passes slowly.
No response.
My world slows.
Saddens.

Are you there? Miss you!
I type again. Send.
I watch the white box.
Waiting. Wanting a response.
Nothing.
Close the white box.
Maybe tomorrow.
I know she misses me too!

mtnman2003
mtnman2003
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dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman3 months ago

guess that it is over

Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
:(...

This is a sweet poem ~ But I do believe she was busy and her boss was busy buzzing around her hive....

:kiss:es

~Honey

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
Playing computer message tag...

can be sheer torture and you have expressed what we all have probably felt more than once - I know I sure have. You achieved conveying the anxiousness; then the optimism of knowing he misses and is missed in return. And then, realizes all is right with the world for another day.<smile> Great job on this your first poem submission. On behalf of the poems side of the Lit neighborhood, we welcome you!!!

Welcome Wagon Vixxx

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
*Awww*

Poor thing. Thinkin we have all been there at one time or another.Loved this sad lil poem. I can feel your pain, your wishing and your hope.. Wonderful flow~!

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Bitter sweet

nice read, conveys

hope very well.

Enjoyed it,

Thanks.

~ J