Seduction

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your voice is the seducer
of my simple mind
husky velvet
that tightens my flesh
your fingers
are the ghosts
of my dreams
trailing over my skin
you torment and tease
promising sweet seduction
with the touch of your lips
when it feels
as though my body
can take no more
you move above me
sleek
hard
hot
into me
one
single
moment
joined
and the world becomes
bright whirling colors
of gasping moans
nothing exists
but you
the sound of your heart beating
beneath my hand
the feel of you
pulsating
pushing
where I cannot hide
your breath
whispering against my ear
my body
arching
twisting
shuddering
in answer
until I feel
poised
on the edge
my fingers digging
tight into your back
your mouth
drinking
the words
from mine
shattering
into pieces
only you can find
my name on your lips
against my breast
merged
entangled
surrounded by our own breathing
your weight
a sweet homecoming
as sleep takes.

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sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
Great

I like the spacing you used on this poem. It carried

the work on and on, and I enjoyed every step.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
wonderful

Simply beautiful, erotic without being crass, lovely word use...dang, I loved it.

ssong

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Some

wonderful erotica, though not subtle, your poem is compelling without the vulgarity often associated with erotica here at lit. Well done...

jim :)

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Great

writing and structure.

takes the reader along on the journey.

And some really nice phrases also.

very nice work

keep it up

and thank you

rene_houstonrene_houstonabout 20 years ago
What a ride!

That was really beautiful. This is the first non-erotic writting I've read after three years on literotica. First of all, it's much more erotic than a lot of the poking and probing you'll read in other areas. Secondly it will prompt me to post some of my own stuff now. This is one of those poems that the more you read it, the more you can visualize. Also, read it S l o w l y for the full effect!