- Erotic Poetry
- seductive river
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lure of curves
she lie
like silken ribbon
limbs branch open
wet
hard wood erect
protruding flooded pool
upward
dripping
from stumpy tip
swell and rise
then descend
again
and again
eternal
seductive river!
- COMMENTS
LilDarlinover 19 years agoI bow* to you an your imagery~~!! Awesome use here.
Just love this poem Art. It shows~ an tells.. **Bravo**
sackover 19 years agoI was just curious, how can a "flooded pool" protrude? I have difficulties visualizing that! Otherwise, an economy of words, delightfully placed. You are quite the poet!
twelveooneover 19 years agovery good
use of wood
and water
this line does not blend as the others do
"like silken ribbon"
