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By SilentMercy
There is a place we all go to be Ourselves
Somewhere in the ripples of Never and Always
Where the peaks and valleys of a time-worn past
Refract pitilessly against an infinite sky of amnesia
Where there is no pleasure, no pain
But a quiet, persistent lull
That reminds us of the Nothingness from whence we sprung
There is a place we have all been
Somewhere in the ripples of Never and Always
Where the toils of Death bore the Fruits of Life
When nothing else mattered, and the anti-void gave way to our first breath
Where the Seed of Time emerged a drone, the canvas to which we add gray with our hearts
And black with our minds
I agree with the previous comment that the use of too many capital letters detracts from the poem, and 'sprang' would be preferable, being grammatically correct. Otherwise, it's a very good effort.
I like this although I don't think the capital letters are needed for extra emphasis, not sure if 'sprung' should be 'sprang'