Seeing Both Sides

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Mayacamas rise feminine
to our west
soft, tree-covered
like supple earth breasts

Vaca Mountains jut masculine
to the east
sculpted in bronze
strong shoulders, biceps to hold us

Beside silver river on richest soil
in the valley between am I
fertile and lush
admiring and desiring both


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tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
It's good

to live in the valley! I can feel the pull you describe. Thanks Syn.

SappholoversSappholoversalmost 20 years ago
The geology intrigues

Neat short poem: I like the way the poem's embrace of geology makes us see and think twice....

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
as lovely

as the sea in your eyes

poetry quiet in your night

a thousand stars burst forth

your words are born

beautiful poem syn :)

LiarLiaralmost 20 years ago
Very vivid

You just keep getting better and better. This is a fantastic painted scene that makes me see it in great detail, in quite a limited number of lines.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
a touch

of erotic nature.

from my favorite earth goddess

beautiful Syn

Thank you

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