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Click hereSea foam green crystal clear
eyes so alive to sell the glory
of beautiful bandaged ones
with paper butterfly wings
tucked behind stained glass egos
“please drown in the glory”
of burning beige snow
the thorny rainbow inhale
unleashes worlds unseen desire
the spin blurs all good and
bad and inbetween the sheets
and foil flame so sweet;
plastic wrapped death -
revisited.
I did not fully grasp the meaning, yet I like what I read. Great phrases. I look forward to more.
*no thermometer rating
Very Vivid! I could have used some help with punctuation, but this blew my mind.
(I do not use the thermometer)
....is definately something hiding in here, and this new poet appears to be feeling her way. I see enough indications of voice to make me look forward eagerly to more work, poems that are polished with clarity. This is a fine first effort, kenseyk. If need reworking, in my opinion, and punctuation. Please keep sharing your work.