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She moves in pale sepia
through bordered halls
and shadowed incandescence –
white dress momentary
as deft fingers seize
at lacy possibilities
and promises whisper
over yielding flesh
to press the motion
of opening doors, hinges
moan of the passing scent,
the touch, to feel the soft
yet ever fleeting blur
of a waning afterglow
and her footsteps in the hall.
Cool poem with lots possibilities. Well written with lots of good imagery. My only problem is with the second line. You could have dropped the 'and' and it would have tightened up a lot.
the lack of substance is what makes it alluring and impossible to pin down. Seamless.