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Click hereseven second assault spin fast
faster faster faster rainbow to white
fade to white fade to white fade to
white scream a shout in a two-byte
world sound sound white sound snow
soundbyte snow system
please bear with me the disjunction is
near
twenty-four hours to oblivion
thirteen seconds and goodbye all
imagination frenzied fucked rocked
talkabout writeabout thinkabout
sex in the snowbyte soundsystem
talkabout writeabout thinkabout
blurry flurry snow snow circuit
sex is a mainstream commodity available
for consumption and use by the general
audience the function of production has
superceded reproduction
seven seconds to eternity oblivion of snow
feeling frenzy sex annihilated
overdrive underbyte snappy snappy short trim
macdonaldization bastardization sexualization
ization ization ization ization ization
machine rythm drumroll synth ballbearing no
piston
piston
sex is a machine functioning in seven
second cycles currently downloading at
7.8 KB/sec seven seconds from oblivion
to oblivion attention attention attention
span deficit
mindpiston fucking sexual commodity no
time no time notime noti me noti me nau
ghty me
in a seven second universe we live
we fuck seven seconds per byte and
nothing on
.
Summer, as always, your words have my mind reeling at 7.8 KB/secs.. :)
~Honey
I may just be dull-minded at the moment, but I had difficulty finding solid ground. It never quite came to me what the hell is going on! LOL... I could venture a guess, but I hate guessing.
Still, the tempo, rhythm, and sounds were all very satisfying. That part is very well done, imo.
One stanza kind of "stuck out" as being a little too different from the others, stylistically:
"sex is a mainstream commodity available
for consumption and use by the general
audience the function of production has
superceded reproduction"
...That had an effect on me like a special bulletin from ABC News or something.
I also thought "ization" could have been iterated one or two less times.
All in all, though, a very satisfying read. Thanks.
the overwhelming speed and focus, disjointed yet driven and I was suddenly there, in the flow and electric climax of the climax. Erotica on steriods... fantastic stuff.
jim : )
your Poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Review"
thanks for the journey~
My Erotic Tale!
Always nice to see feedback! Any critical suggestions?