Seven Second Assault

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seven second assault spin fast
faster faster faster rainbow to white
fade to white fade to white fade to
white scream a shout in a two-byte
world sound sound white sound snow
soundbyte snow system

please bear with me the disjunction is
near

twenty-four hours to oblivion
thirteen seconds and goodbye all
imagination frenzied fucked rocked

talkabout writeabout thinkabout
sex in the snowbyte soundsystem
talkabout writeabout thinkabout
blurry flurry snow snow circuit

sex is a mainstream commodity available
for consumption and use by the general
audience the function of production has
superceded reproduction

seven seconds to eternity oblivion of snow
feeling frenzy sex annihilated
overdrive underbyte snappy snappy short trim
macdonaldization bastardization sexualization
ization ization ization ization ization
machine rythm drumroll synth ballbearing no
piston

piston

sex is a machine functioning in seven
second cycles currently downloading at
7.8 KB/sec seven seconds from oblivion
to oblivion attention attention attention
span deficit

mindpiston fucking sexual commodity no
time no time notime noti me noti me nau
ghty me

in a seven second universe we live
we fuck seven seconds per byte and
nothing on
.

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Honey123Honey123about 19 years ago
Oh My!

Summer, as always, your words have my mind reeling at 7.8 KB/secs.. :)

~Honey

foehnfoehnabout 19 years ago
I had some trouble here...

I may just be dull-minded at the moment, but I had difficulty finding solid ground. It never quite came to me what the hell is going on! LOL... I could venture a guess, but I hate guessing.

Still, the tempo, rhythm, and sounds were all very satisfying. That part is very well done, imo.

One stanza kind of "stuck out" as being a little too different from the others, stylistically:

"sex is a mainstream commodity available

for consumption and use by the general

audience the function of production has

superceded reproduction"

...That had an effect on me like a special bulletin from ABC News or something.

I also thought "ization" could have been iterated one or two less times.

All in all, though, a very satisfying read. Thanks.

jthserrajthserraabout 19 years ago
The sheer intensity here

the overwhelming speed and focus, disjointed yet driven and I was suddenly there, in the flow and electric climax of the climax. Erotica on steriods... fantastic stuff.

jim : )

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
mentioned

your Poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Review"

thanks for the journey~

My Erotic Tale!

SummerMorningSummerMorningabout 19 years agoAuthor
Tx Liar and Anna ;)

Always nice to see feedback! Any critical suggestions?

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