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Click hereI refuse to
just be
another
random picture,
a meaningless
snapshot
takin in the
HEAT
of a SIZZLING
moment.
I will
be
more
than a quick
STEAMING sexual
rendezvous.
I will
earn
your RESPECT
WITHOUT
getting on my
knees
or
laying on my
back.
I don't want
S-E-X
anymore
but
I will
make you
scream my
name...
when making
LOVE!
I see a couple of spots that I'd tweak a bit, but it's pretty darn good. Thanks for sharing. :)
I like the ending.
"takin" ??
"laying" - are you going for a double meaning?
I bet this looks great on paper too. My kind of poem. Reminds me of the days before the honeymoon was over. How things change