- Erotic Poetry
- Sexual Pleasure
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Click hereI see a big black cock
That would penetrate me hard and swift
Grabbing my tits and kissing me
He fucks me hard until he cums on my hot body
Turns me over and opens my legs
Kisses my ass and puts his dick in me
I feel the pleasure of his big cock
While he pleasures himself with his cock in me
I start to yell, he starts to moan
But we all cum at the same time
I want it again
So that I feel the double plesure
However time is slipping, until it stops
He said he will do it next week
But I would love if he does it tonight
So that I can enjoy his beautiful cum
In my mouth and in my body !!!!!
- COMMENTS
vrosej10about 13 years agoThis anon is being a tool to everyone. Check my latest offering. He gave it to me to.
This piece is a little cliched. Try reading some of the other stuff here and go your own way. What works in erotica is a unique point of view. You have one, we all do. Find it and write from there.
CuddlyAlabout 13 years agoDo not be put off by the vicious public comment. I suspect the person who penned it may have done so for sick, racist reaons. Take comfort from the words of the American author Mark Twain: "Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured."
Anonymousabout 13 years agowhy don't you just write a story this is about as poetic as a bowel movement and even less intresting
