Sexy Friend ;*

I wrote this poem in March of 2013 when I was 19. What do you think ?

Sexy Friend ;*

With a tight hug and kiss on the lips ; it all begins,
in a way it's a lie to say we're "just friends".
You trail your kisses down my neck to my collarbone,
it's all I can do not to let out a soft moan.
Then your hands move away from my back,
to my hips; where that special spot is at.
Feeling your fingers trail across my skin,
dirrty thoughts corrupt my mind within.
Goosebumps rise; and my heart soars,
you make me want you more and more.
Up my stomach; to my chest,
is where your touch tickles best.
As you touch and kiss all over me,
I can feel how you're getting "happy".
My hand wanders down shamelessly,
I rub you through your pants; teasing-ly.
And when you kiss me on my lips forcefully,
I know for damn sure that means you're horny.
After your pants and boxers are are pulled down,
while kneeling on the ground; I kiss and lick you all around.
You remove my shirt and bra; and on the floor they go,
my body tingles in excitement; all the way down to my toes.
When you feel like it's time; you pull me up off the floor,
kissing me so much more forcefully than before.
Then on your bed I will lie,
and you kiss me softly on my inner thighs.
I can't help but watch you; my eyes filled with desire,
I want you so bad; it feels like I'm on fire.
A few flicks of your tongue and a naughty kiss,
it's not much longer that you can resist.
Next thing I know; you're between my knees,
but no longer is it your lips and tongue that tease.
The next thing I feel is so amazing; I whimper,
it's so hard not to; as I feel you move deeper and deeper.
I try my hardest to be quiet; but it it's not easy,
especially because you know exactly what to do to please me.
I see fireworks as my body explodes,
I'm falling for you again; as you very well know.
I know what I'm doing to my heart; may be risky,
it's just everything about you gets me hott and frisky.
You know exactly what happens a while after then,
I make you cum for me too; my sexy "friend".