shadowlands

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Haunting vision, haunting words; never to have the rest of you {at least the 'you' you hoped for}.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
realistic

Facing the truth of someone standing right next to you that you desire but can't have. Nice appropriate photo.

Honey123Honey123about 19 years ago
:kiss:es

This is one of my favorite sayings: *The worst way to miss someone is to have them standing right next to you and knowing you can't have them.* Your poem made me feel the same thing..

~Honey

sweetnpetitesweetnpetiteover 19 years ago
that sucks...

the situation, not the poem.

matriarchmatriarchover 19 years ago
*sigh*......

...so you love her too??

Completely empathise. The brevity is perfect. No more needs to be said. Mat

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