- Erotic Poetry
- Shadows
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Click hereI sit alone in the dark
Burning for you
My passion casting
Shadows on the wall,
Wanting to touch you
...to taste you
...to feel your arousal
Under my fingers
...to kiss your neck,
Your shoulders,
Your back
...to reach around
Pull you close to me
...to feel your hands on mine
Urging me
To pinch and caress
and dig into your warm skin
...to be surrounded
by your soft fleshy ass
Pushing my cock longways
Back against my own belly
...to bend you over,
Just far enough
To slide into your wetness
...to smell your sweet passion
Mixed with the sweat
Of anticipation
....to hear your sighs
Your moans
Your screams
Your satisfaction
...to explode all around you
All over you
Like a thundercloud
Battling a tornado
In the middle of a raging river
and feel the darkness roll back in
as I am left with the remnants
of my own passion.
- COMMENTS
Bill Dadaabout 19 years ago...on poems that I don't give a 100 to. I don't feel qualified enough to offer any suggestions to make them better. The same applies here, but there are some lines that are so powerful that I felt I had to aknowledge them. They are:
'My passion casting
Shadows on the wall'
'Like a thundercloud
Battling a tornado
In the middle of a raging river'
'and feel the darkness roll back..'
I loved these lines, but the rest seemed like a different poem.
