She is my precious queen
She is my slut
She is my a cherished being
She is a hole
A whipping post
A release for the monster
Which she so dearly
loves
And I love
her smile
her fear
her humiliation
her tears
her face as she explodes in orgasm
She is my most prized possession
She is my slave
She is the yang to my yin
She is my receptacle
She is my everything
She is my love
She is my sub
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To each..... She found it amazingly erotic and poetic as did others when I first published it. That is the difficulty in being in different locations in a journey. Some have liked Vanilla Twist better as a story if at an early level of simply attempting to understand.
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Reducing her to a simple 'hole' and a 'receptacle' is very difficult to reconcile with 'precious queen' and 'cherished being'. Your 'love' is also considered property. I get it. I just don't get into it. And for people like me who don't get into it, there needs to be something else to bridge the gap or otherwise it barely registers as poetic and erotic on our end.more...
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