- Erotic Poetry
- She asked me to stay
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She drove me home one night
And then she asked me to stay,
So I got down on my knees and
I made that Goddess pray,
At the service of my lips,
Near those beautiful hips,
As she ground out the rhythms
of a Lunar Eclipse.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis poem needs work if the poet wants a good poem. The beginning is contrived and worse, boring. The only lines that I find interesting are: "As she ground out the rhythms of a Lunar Eclipse." Cut the beginning and work with the last 2 lines and you will have a better poem.
