She cannot help

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She tells him that she cannot help but play
And strum to see if, from the melody,
Her delight can lie in the constancy
Of movement, as her hand is wont to stray
In close proximity to those fell parts,
Which entertain her fingers and her palm;
And excite her, but ruffle inner calm;
While she is dreaming of a touch that smarts:
It adds new moisture to fluidity;
It makes her keen and wail with the best -
So pleasure slowly builds and gently swells;
Let heartbeats pound out loud, excitedly,
Until, finding the summit, she'll attest
She cannot help but do just as he tells.

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vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
Go the Masturbation paean!

I love a good masturbation piece and this one is pretty damn cool. Great conceit.

Maria2394Maria2394about 13 years ago
lovely

it has soft rhythm and was a pleasure to read. The rhyme is non- invasive, smooth and easy to read. Good work

~ maria

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
If I read......

......this correctly M/s, masturbation and musicality all are here.

"It makes her keen and wail with the best -" might read more smoothly as " It makes her keen, wail with the best" - there are one or two stumbles in the rhythm here and there but - well done.

Tess