- Non-Erotic Poetry
- She Is
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She is pliable
Like fine clay
Spun and fashioned
To My every need
She is solid
Like marble
I chip away the scars
And leave the beauty
She is a blank canvas
I add color to her world
No, not to reinvent her
Just bringing out her elegance
She is guarded for others hurt her
I chase away the monsters
Beneath the old bed
And hold her tightly
She is in a frenzy
I tell her to breathe
That we have a lifetime
To just enjoy each moment
She is sleeping; Dreaming perhaps
I spoon close giving her warmth
Let her rhythmic ease me into sleep
Knowing that I am the lucky one
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineerover 9 years agoAgree with ishtat. If you cut back the pronouns by 2/3's, including "her," i think you'd present a nice lyrical poem.
ishtatover 9 years agoIf you dropped all the 'she is's' , she might be more mysterious and interesting.
