- Erotic Poetry
- Sheets
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Curl a strand of my straight hair on your finger
As you look me in my insecure brown eyes
Before you leave make sure your smell will linger
On these sheets of cologne and testosterone
Kiss me softly as I feel that prickling tickle
Of the unshaven hair on your pointed chin
Stare into a soul that is seemingly fickle
Be kind and don’t give me that lying grin
These white sheets encase us in a beautiful world
Where spirits of lust breathe into our red ears
Where every straight strand turns into a curl
Where the devil looks at us and proudly leers
Lean into me and let our breaths collide
In a delectable, poisonous mixture
Of sweet spices and filthy wishes inside
Tickle my ear’s mind as them, you whisper
- COMMENTS
Desejoalmost 13 years agoThere are some interesting lines in this, and the use of rhyme even seems to work (it normally does nothing for me). But the whole red ear devil poison vibe confuses it for me, because it only appears in the third stanza. As does your title- if you want the focus on sheets, then why bury the lines referring to sheets? I'd try to rearrange it so those lines, or whichever lines mean the most to you, stand alone - they will be more powerful that way.
